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[moe81]

Title: No More

Rating: G

Pairing: It’s a secret

Topic: One

Words: 122

 

One more way.

One more time.

One more…

One more…

One more…

 

He was tired. He was over it. He’d had enough. No more ‘one more’. This was the end of the line and come hell or high water, he wasn’t going to let it happen again.

 

It was damn difficult but in the end all he could do was grit his teeth and tell himself that it was the only way. He ignored the tears, he ignored the pleas; he ignored it all. The greater good was all that mattered.

 

Besides, tying his captain to the mast and gagging him after one too many rounds of “I’m still hungry. Just one more?” really didn’t seem like that big of a deal.

Comments

[anyjen.livejournal.com]

Ooh, you got me there. Here I was bracing for heartbreak, and you had to go and end it like that. That was brilliant. XD

But really, it must be pretty hard on Sanji to deny Luffy food when his self-appointed mission is to feed people, no matter who or what. And considering how much Luffy eats (and his energy expenditure) it must get hard to tell whether he is genuinely hungry or just being his usual gluttonous self...

[tonko.livejournal.com]

Heeeeeee!

And I'm imagining Luffy's glare over the gag as his beloved crew afterwards.

[horusguard76.livejournal.com]

You know Moe... I really love your way to keep the suspense up until the end stories. And how the hell do you always manage it with so few words? I sincerely envy your talent! (psst, is my face green already? ;) )

I really expected something bad; already envisioned them all at Raftel and Sanji being ready to sacrificing himself for one of the girls...

[moe81.livejournal.com]

*loves your green face to bits*

Honestly, I wouldn't mind writing longer drabbles. I look at my results and usually think 'too short again' but by then the point is across and I'm too lazy to add more.

I had angst all ready to go...then I failed and the angst left.

[moe81.livejournal.com]

*cheers on the mis-leading angst*

I think Luffy will always be hungry but there has to be a point for rationing. At least having him tied up, Sanji doesn't have think about it or even feel a little guilty for not giving in.

[anyjen.livejournal.com]

Theirs must be the only crew where tying the captain to the main mast is quite a sensible thing to do. Can you imagine, say, Whitebeard or Gold D. Roger tied to the main mast, kicked across the ship or used as a slingshot for cannonballs? ^^UU

[moe81.livejournal.com]

*brain malfunctions at the image of Whitebeard's crew doing that*

[anyjen.livejournal.com]

See? See? Yet we accept it without even blinking every time it happens to Luffy... Seriously, if there was a "How to Behave like a Pirate Captain 101" course, Luffy'd probably fail... hell, his behaviour actually more closely resembles that of a pet. A very strong, possesive and protective pet, but pet nonetheless. XD

Well, there is a chance Luffy will calm down by the time he reaches Whitebeard's age and tying him to the main mast will no longer be necessary, but until then... XD

[horusguard76.livejournal.com]

lol Yeah, green actually suits me well. ;)

Oh? And I would give a lot to be able to write as concise as you do. I always end up with a novel. Even when I just write about the weather. lol It's a curse, I am telling you! Save meeeeeeeeee, please! You got to call Dean and Sam from Supernatural to save me! lol

Oh no, that's downright tragic. 'the angst left'. Where is that little punk hiding? Do you think we can flush him out with fire or something?

[crystalbluefox.livejournal.com]

To be honest, you got me as well ;p
I damn hell thought (sorry the language) that this would turn out to be a death-fic... then a weird idea popped up in my mind that it might be because of his smokes: Just one more smoke, one more... and then a day no more since it had cost him too much or something like that... and then it was LUFFY and his hunger for more FOOD! XDD
God I love you moe -huge smile-

[yume76.livejournal.com]

aww. poor sanji. it's all luffy's fault for driving him to be so cruel. *giggles* this is great.