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[moe81]

Title: Caught

Rating: PG…I think

Pairing: Unintentional Zoro/Sanji + Doflamingo

Topic: Innocence

Words: 86

Blood fell to the ground, a small puddle forming under booted feet. Limp legs swayed as the body was shaken, mouth gaping open in an unvoiced scream and pale skin turning a light shade of purple as the air supply was cut off.

 

Light glinted off stylishly gaudy glasses and an evil smirk was directed at the couple in the alleyway.

 

Tanned hand snapped to the side and a loud crack echoed off the shadowed walls.

 

Taking advantage of the innocent really was too much fun.

Comments

[anyjen.livejournal.com]

That... was... creepy? O_o

Dunno, still trying to get to grips with this. Feedback gets hard when your brain is whimpering in fear in a corner.

[moe81.livejournal.com]

He has that effect.

So my plan to make you whimper was successful, even though I would never do that 'cause that's mean and I like you so I wouldnt...really...want to...you know...do that and I'm gonna go over here and think of more creepy fic to write. 'Cause it's creepy...and makes you whimper *coughs* XD

[anyjen.livejournal.com]

"If you love them, make them whimper". Seriously, what is so wrong with writers, that they love to torture their readers? :P

(there is nothing quite as satisfying and guilt-tripping as making a reader cry... wonder why that is...)

[yume76.livejournal.com]

this is worth two cents times gazillions. love ya.